Showing posts with label first lines. Show all posts
Showing posts with label first lines. Show all posts
Thursday, December 15, 2011
A
few months ago, Steph wrote about Endings, and how they can
make or break a novel. Today let’s talk Beginnings.
Some
novels seem to hook readers from the first sentence while others
take a little longer to settle into. There are readers who will overlook a slower beginning if they are intrigued enough by the
concept, but this isn’t the
case for everyone. Like everything in fiction,
beginnings are subjective.
New writers hear all the taboos: "Don’t start your book with the
protagonist waking up, or with someone dying. Don’t directly address the reader, don’t
describe the weather, and don’t begin your novel with a dream." All sound advice.
But what about the oft-cited tip: "Start your book with action, action,
action"? Is that really what readers want every time?
Action from the get-go can be great. Especially if it's not overblown. And if
the writer has made you care enough about the
protagonist. But there is something to be said for getting to
know the
characters before they start battling dragons. My favorite
beginnings are full of voice -- they explain who the main character is and what he/she cares about, and they hint at
the action to come.
One of the best things about fiction is its variety. Amy Reed begins BEAUTIFUL with the protagonist describing a slice of pizza while we hear her internal thoughts about her new school. Sarah Ockler’s TWENTY BOY SUMMER begins with a short first chapter that shows the narrator survived something that forever changed her life. And Sarah Dessen’s JUST LISTEN hooks you by explaining that the protagonist filmed a TV commercial months ago that is now being aired all over town -- when all she wants is to hide. These three beginnings hooked me right away. Though they are all crafted differently, they're equally compelling.
What are some of your favorite beginnings? How important is that first page, or paragraph? Know of any fabulous books that successfully broke the "rules"?
Happy
Reading,
IP
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Wednesday, October 12, 2011
There are some seriously scrumptious stories out right now...books that are so decadent, I am more than willing to take that leap into a strange, new, or upside-down world.
The best stories are the ones where you know with the first word or the first line, that you are in good hands. Two of our recent favorites:

It starts with a crack, a sputter, and a spark. The match hisses to life.
- The Near Witch by Victoria Schwab

- The Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor
Of course, we have to mention:

Because she was a princess she had a Pegasus.
- Pegasus by Robin McKinley

I write this sitting in the kitchen sink.
- I Capture the Castle by Dodie Smith
Okay, these writers are stupendous, but it also emphasizes how important it is to craft that first sentence, that first impression. No pressure or anything. ;)
What's the best first line you've ever read, that made you go all goose-pimply?
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