Friday, June 28, 2013

Every story is like a bridge between author and reader. Every story is an attempt to make a connection. And though it might seem like being as general as possible would allow a story to reach the most people, that's actually the opposite of the truth.
Readers connect with specifics.
In other words, we like details. We don't want to read about "the girl who went to the beach." We want to read about "the sweet child with hair as golden as the sand, who spent the day digging holes in search of those tiny clams that skitter down into the earth every time the tide rolls away."
Even if the details don't match our personal experiences, they paint a better picture, and it's those pictures that stay in our minds, that remind us of our own picture-memories.
A great example of this is the very-short story "The Scarlet Ibis" by James Hurst, a bittersweet tale about a boy and his sickly younger brother. From the very first paragraph, Hurst pulls us into his world with a detailed description of the setting:
"The flower garden was stained with rotting brown magnolia petals ... the oriole nest in the elm was untenanted and rocked back and forth like an empty cradle."
Not only do they paint an incredible picture, but the words "rotting" and "empty cradle" also set the tone and foreshadow the tragic ending.
Leigh Bardugo (of SHADOW AND BONE fame) is also a master of specifics. In her (free!) story "The Witch of Duva," Bardugo writes:
"Nadya tried to get her mother to eat what little food they had, giving up portions of turnip and potato, bundling her mother’s frail body in shawls and seating her on the porch in the hope that the fresh air might return some appetite to her. The only thing she seemed to crave were little cakes made by the widow Karina Stoyanova, scented with orange blossom and thick with icing."
Doesn't your mouth water just reading that?
And the magic of specificity works on more than just nature or food. You can find it -- you should find it -- in the action, dialogue, and everything in between.
This is from another Bardugo story, "The Too-Clever Fox":
"Koja darted forward and nudged her trembling hand once with his muzzle, then slipped back into the wood."
Dart, nudge, trembling, muzzle, slip. Such delicious details.
Many other YA authors do this well. Off the top of our heads, we'd say Rae Carson, Maggie Stiefvater, and Laini Taylor. Who else can you think of that gets specific in their stories? We'd love some recommendations of other books or writers to connect with!
And the magic of specificity works on more than just nature or food. You can find it -- you should find it -- in the action, dialogue, and everything in between.
"Koja darted forward and nudged her trembling hand once with his muzzle, then slipped back into the wood."
Dart, nudge, trembling, muzzle, slip. Such delicious details.
Many other YA authors do this well. Off the top of our heads, we'd say Rae Carson, Maggie Stiefvater, and Laini Taylor. Who else can you think of that gets specific in their stories? We'd love some recommendations of other books or writers to connect with!
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Thursday, June 20, 2013

Ever since this TED Talk by Andrew Stanton (quotes are from his talk). I've thought about little else when it comes to storytelling. While his talk is called "The Clues to a Great Story," it might as well be called "Wonder." Because that's what I took away from it. This essential element is often what's missing from making a good book...great.
"Capturing a truth from your experience."
It's the thing that can't really be defined or explained in plain clothes. It's a character's tone of voice, and pitch perfect dialogue. An inspired setting that takes you outside of one world and places you in another. It's the thing that provides the framework for the reader to fill in the blanks. A good story makes you wonder what it's like to be someone else, somewhere else, with problems that are either exactly like ours or so different that it makes us feel like we have even a small sampling of control.
It's that moment in "Close Encounters of the Third Kind" where Richard Dreyfuss makes a mountain of his mashed potatoes and says, "This means something. This is important."
"We're born problem solvers...we can't help ourselves from wanting to complete the sentence, to fill it in...Don't give them 4. Give them 2+2."
That's the wonder in story for me--the compulsion, the meaning, the purpose. It's not what initially hooks me, although wonder can do that. It's what captivates me, that makes me unable to stop reading. It's the open tap into human creativity, and writing that uses each and every word efficiently (not only for beauty).
"Wonder is honest...it can't be artificially invoked."
Perhaps the next time someone asks you why you love a book, and you don't have words for it, you could say, "It made me wonder." The right people will know what you mean. ;)
What was the last book (or any art) that made you feel a sense of meaning, or a shared truth, or just entertained the hell out of you?
Noah St. John knows how to tell a story. Knocked our socks off.
Zev knows self portraits. Made us want to be ten again.
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Wednesday, June 19, 2013

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Thursday, June 13, 2013









Contest: Leave a comment telling us about a fun author event that you went to or getting to meet an author you love, and you could win a signed copy of Sarah Dessen’s new book, The Moon and More. (Contest closes on the 4th of July.)
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Tuesday, June 11, 2013

First some fresh-off-the-press announcements and Book Buzz:
Always cool when this happens:
The Write Life:
Pic of the Week:
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Friday, June 7, 2013

I don’t know why, but when summer rolls in with its sizzling blacktops and sun-kissed days, I find myself drawn to the literary love. As in, capital R-Romance. Characters coming-of-age at sailing camp... teens having beachside bonfires... You know, those feel-good books that let you melt away from it all.

One of my favorite golden books is KEEPING THE MOON by Sarah Dessen because it incorporates so many aspects of the adolescent journey. Of course, there's the love story. But there's also the friendship story and the family story and the self-esteem story, all so perfectly entwined. Plus, there's a cat named Norman and a restaurant called the Last Chance! Mostly, though, I love this book because it is about appreciating who you are while at the same time discovering the person you can someday become. '

- TWENTY BOY SUMMER by Sarah Ockler... about love, loss and the lies laced in between.
- MY LIFE NEXT DOOR by Huntley Fitzpatrick... in which a young girl must decide whether her loyalties lie in the bonds of friendship, family or her one true love.
- WANDERLOVE by Kirsten Hubbard... a travel adventure featuring Bria (a good girl trying to go bad) and Rowan (a bad boy trying to stay good).
See what I mean? Golden. On my list this summer is Sarah Dessen's just-released THE MOON AND MORE. Has anyone read it? Weheartya's Stephanie is actually slated to interview Sarah D. this week and will be posting that interview here on Thursday!
So what are your favorite YA beach books? Any new ones that you can't wait to get your hands on? Let us know and Happy Reading!
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